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Crystal Flame -Basic-

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I haven't named all the Characters yet.

Main Characters
Main Male: Kiyoshi Yukimoto
Main Female: Yuuko Chiaka


Main Supporting Characters
Yuuto
Ryuu
Ai Yukimoto
"Kiyoshi's Father"
"Kiyoshi's Mother"


Main Foes
UB (Evil boss No name yet)
Aoihi




First of all I like to say
I can't help it… I'm a person who loves writing a story with pain and struggle. Making the Main Character to feel pain and defeat. Not having some ultra powerful super Saiyan 13 Dude that has ultimate power and can never be defeated (not to insult the DBz Fans as it's a great Anime). No I want them to struggle and barley make it, even losing from time to time.

And this new story as plenty of struggle in it. I tried making a more Main stream Battle Manga, you know like Bleach and FMA aka Action, Adventure, Comedy and some Drama (Not that I'm that great of a writer, but I do hope I one day reach that level).


The story
The setting is a fantasy Japan in the medieval/samurai times (don't feel like searching the name of the era).

The story revolves around special kind of Crystals. The Crystals are fused into a person after an certain event (needs to be worked out) and will give the infused person incredible power like the ability to control fire, incredible strength, gain speed and so on. But the crystal somehow uses the energy of the user giving the him or her great pain from time to time and it can even lead to death and most likely lead to madness for those who can't handle the power.

The Crystal is infused in the human's body at the place where the hart should be. If the crystal breaks the person will die and also the other way around, if the human dies the crystal will brake.

The Story revolves around a male and a female around the age of 18. They're childhood friends and trained at the same Dojo together for years. (Where FM always kicked MM's ass). Until one day MM gets infused with a Crystal.
The crystal gives him the power of regeneration and that's all (for now). He's able to survive and heal wounds that would have killed a normal human 10 times over. But he still feels the same as any human and even more as the regeneration also causes great pain. And not only that, it's not an unlimited power and it drains a lot of energy from MM. The more he regenerates the slower he regenerates until the point that he's out of power and near death.

There will be a lot of struggle in the story as MM gets beaten up big time in battles, but he will always stand up and fight until his last breath.

MM will be in  pain from time to time even out of battle because the Crystal is slowly eating his life force and his mind away and he seeks a way to control the Crystal or remove it. MM tries to hide the pain from FM as he doesn't want her to worry and he thinks it's his problem and he has to deal with it on his own.  

FM will also be a main part of the story and the fights. She's a strong women who always bested MM in fights and won't just sit and watch like some helpless princes who needs to be rescued from a giant Monkey.

She will also be the one who kicks MM's ass for comical release as she will no longer need to hold back on him because he can regenerate his injuries. So things like a few broken ribs won't be that uncommon.

On a side note, I was looking at a Barbie© when I got the idea of this story... Does that make me a f*cked up person?



Characters

Currently working on the story together with Kuro-sempai.
Who is willing to create the Manga with me.

I will update it as soon as the story is worked out.

Image and Crystal Flame logo are drawn by Kuro-sempai so all credits go to her.


Remember Comments, Ideas and thoughts are always welcome!
I'm not found of people who burn my thoughts to the ground, but criticism is also welcome. I won't turn a blind eye to it and it's helpful most of the time.


I do not plan on writing in detail, but please do not steal my work.
© 2011 - 2024 Mangaka-Roach
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Doublearth's avatar
BOOYA!! this is awesome looking forward to more of this :D