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Hanako -Basic-

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"A happy ending must be earned in blood."

Genres: Action and Drama
Main Male has no name yet so is called MM

Intro
Don't let the name fool you (Hanako means Flower Child)  as "A happy ending must be earned in blood." is pretty much the core of this story. It's bloody and realistic story in the fact that it could happen.

It's the year 2015 a 2020 and Japan has fallen into some rough times. Jobs are lost and the general population is unhappy. The main character just living his life, going to school like he always does. But one day things are a bit different as the school as the school gets taken over by a group of armed and despair terrorist. Now MM got a choice wait for death or take his faith in his own hands.

As I said it won't be a soft story. People will die, people will cry and people will get hurt. To give a quick example: Two students will run away after the terrorist invade the school and are both shot in the back by snipers. So that kind of story. The main character will pretty much be the one who won't chicken out and safe the day. With the thought: If I'm going to die than I at least die to get out if here alive. So he will early on save his classmates and kill two terrorists. MM will be a bit selfish thinking more about himself than the other students. Killing the Terrorist more and less cold blooded as long as he lives.


Main Character
The Main Character is a loner in his daly school life, sitting quietly in a corner and ignored by all except one. One girl interacts with him a sweet girl who has a flower clip in her hair. You won't come to know much about the girl not even her name as the first few pages of introduction will be without text as it is not needed and gives the effect I need. She's the kind of girl that is his only friend and would later become his girlfriend/wife.

But there normal life will change in a second as screams and guns shots are heard on in the hallway. Armed man barge in moments later and fire some shots in the classroom. Ordering them all to keep down and don't do unnecessary stupid things.


Story
The girl with the flower will be shot by the terrorists. She will sit against the wall covered in blood as Mm makes his way over to her to help her. But it's to late for her, she smiles and strokes the young boy on his face before she breaths her last breath and her arms falls down. The flower clip she was always wearing falls out of her hand as the life leaves her body.

This event will lead to MM's wrath. Fear will leave his body and he ends up killing the two terrorist. Now this is not done in some super battle Manga sort of way but more in: he steals one of the guns and kills the terrorist at point blank.

The police will surround the school but can't act as there are a lot of terrorist not only heavily armed but also holding innocents on fire.  

The story will end when MM kills the "boss". He will have acquired a Katana from on of the terrorists and now makes his way out of the school. He signals that the pupils need to stay back. Mm is badly injured and cover in blood. He's cut and shut but still standing. An army of guards and media is waiting for them as he stumbles out of the school. He has a gun on his back and uses the katana as a cane in order to prevent him from falling down.

He will eventually stop in front of all the police who shout and aim at him. MM will raise his hand and give a sign with his hand. At that moment all the pupils and teachers run out of the school and past MM.

MM is the hero but kind of ignored. He looks at the sky and smiles. Right after that he coughs up blood  and falls to the ground. The frames blacken as he loses conscious. People shout and run over to him.

The last frames his the Katana he held so dear hanging above the fire plate. It zooms out slowly, seeing the back of a chair with some man in it. The frames zooms even more and you can see a bit of the face of a man who's already a bit old. A clear scar will be shown indicating that's MM as he was cut on his face. Now the frames zooms for the last time and a little table is shown with on it the clip of the young girl.


Outro
The story story will have  bloody action and stealth. There will be fights with guns, knifes and even a katana. I hope it will be around 80 to a 100 pages and it has a lot more to it than that I have written down. Don't want to spoiler it all and it's a pain to sum it up ;)


I haven't checked the grammar, spelling and the flow of the text. So will do that soon.
Removed previously zombie story and replaced it with an older one.

Will update it when I come around to it as I haven't checked the grammar, spelling and the flow of the text. So will do that soon.

Remember Comments, Ideas and thoughts are always welcome!
I'm not found of people who burn my thoughts to the ground, but criticism is also welcome. I won't turn a blind eye to it and it's helpful most of the time.


I do not plan on writing in detail, but please do not steal my work.


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Actually, the image you've attached to this story belongs to me: [link]
I understand that the website you found it on did not have my permission to use or distribute the image, so it is not your fault, but I do have a stone-clad policy of not giving permission for use of my work to ANYONE for ANY reason. That being said, I would very much appreciate it if you would remove my work from this posting.

Thank you very much!

Charli Siebert